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Neil Tortorella

In my previous post about press kits, I wrote that press releases are often the anchor of your publicity efforts. To help ensure your potent prose sees the light of day, be sure your releases conform to accepted format standards.

I dusted off one of my older releases to use as an example. First comes the release (and a plug for BoDo bud, Jeff Fisher’s, first book). Next, we’ll look at each element of a release. Get your release writing down and pretty soon you’ll be the media darling you were meant to be.

News Release

Contact:
Neil Tortorella
330.305.1554
[email address here]

December 6, 2004

For Immediate Release

Local Designer Featured in New Graphic Design Book

North Canton, OH: North Canton-based graphic designer, Neil Tortorella of Tortorella Design, is featured in the newly released book, The Savvy Designer’s Guide to Success: Ideas and tactics for a killer career, by Jeff Fisher.

The book includes advice on the building blocks of a graphic design career; education options; what designers have learned in the “school of hard knocks;” how to get more than your foot in the door in your quest for clients or a job and various aspects of dealing with clients on projects. Communication issues are covered in some detail, as are establishing a business persona and the nitty-gritty issues of business - pricing, contracts and more.

In addition to Tortorella, the volume also contains anecdotes and career lessons from designers Jack Anderson; Habib Bajrami; Milton Glaser; Art Chantry; Christopher Gee, Von Glitschka, Nigel Gordijk, Chuck Green; Nigel Holmes; Karen Larson, Morgan Mann, John McWade, Clement Mok; Jennifer Morla; Catherine Morley; Ellen Shapiro; Valarie Martin Stuart, Travis Tom; Peleg Top; Petrula Vrontikis and several other industry professionals.

Marketing and promotion is a major topic in the book. In addition, a number of designers relate major career obstacles and how they were overcome - or avoided in the future. There’s also information on doing pro bono work and getting involved in the design community. The book is full of industry-related quotes, business resources and materials to help designers be more successful as business people.

Published by HOW Design Books, The Savvy Designer’s Guide to Success: Ideas and tactics for a killer career can be found at most major booksellers both on and offline.

With over 30 years experience in graphic and web design, Neil’s primary focus is helping small businesses effectively communicate with their audiences. He is also the recipient of numerous awards for design excellence and cofounder of CreativeLatitude.com, a popular online resource for both creatives and clients. Tortorella Design’s web site can be found at www.tortorelladesign.com.

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Let’s take this apart and look at each element.
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Contact:
Neil Tortorella
330.305.1554
[email address]

This is your contact info and should appear at the top of the release. If an editor, reporter or writers has questions, you want them to be able to get in touch with you for clarification.

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December 6, 2004

The date of the release.
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Local Designer Featured in New Graphic Design Book

Here’s your headline. It should immediately tell the editor what the release is all about. This release went out to my local media contacts, so the headline focused on being local, rather than something overly witty.
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North Canton, OH:
Insert the dateline at the beginning of the first paragraph. Ironically, the “dateline” isn’t a date at all. It’s the location of your office or where the news originated.

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North Canton-based graphic designer, Neil Tortorella of Tortorella Design, is featured in the newly released book, The Savvy Designer’s Guide to Success: Ideas and tactics for a killer career, by Jeff Fisher.

Lead off with the most important information. Think of the body of your release as an inverted pyramid with less important information lower in the release. Editors tend to cut from the bottom.

When you’re drafting your release, put on your reporter hat. They want to know who, what where, when and why. They also love facts, so give them as many as you can.

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[more] and/or ###

If your release is two or more pages, let the editor know by including [more] at the end of each page. Finally, close your release with either “-30-” or “###,” the customary symbols to say “That’s all folks.”


Until the next
Marketing Minute
all the best,
nt

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Comments to this post:

Comment: Joan Stewart says

Your advice on press releases is right on the mark.
You might be interested in knowing that I’m offering a free email tutorial called “89 Ways to Write Powerful Press Releases.”

I explain why we should no longer be writing press releases only for the press, but for consumers who can find the releases online, click through to our websites and enter our sales cycle, even if journalists don’t think our release is worthy of attention.

The course includes several terrific press release samples as well as “before” and “after” makeovers.

You can sign up for the free press release writing tutorial at http://www.PublicityHound.com/pressreleasetips/art.htm

It’s a very long tutorial but please stick with it. By the time you’re done, it will be like earning a master’s degree in writing and distributing press releases. And you’ll know more about this topic than many PR people.

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